Two partners are in colors,
They are in bubbles of blooming around,
Making the nature beautiful,
The message from them:
To tell the world they are in love, wishes of love.
They are worth to the hymn of lovely love,
They are beautiful between
The earth and the universe.
She says, “We are born in bush.”
He says, “We are spaces of the heart.”
She says again, “One day we will be
Dried out, even if we do want to be fine.”
He replies, “By definition, we are
The occupants of love, and similarly
By definition we are born to die.”
“Shh! Do not say these more,” she says,
“Let the earth to appear in its full bloom.”
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Trevor Maynard • Always light and spiritual, and always expressing a wonder at life, your words have a gentle rhythm and a powerful message.
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks dear poet and friend, Trevor Maynard, for the beautiful comments. I love it.
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Andy Daniels • Love comes around
Love comes around it can’t be beat
Perhaps love at first sight
Love comes around makes lives complete
And brings so much delight
Love comes around we let it flow
Perhaps folk may wait
Love comes around and as we know
Sometimes it comes too late
Love comes around for all to share
Perhaps we don’t realise
Love comes around it’s everywhere
Takes many by surprise
Love comes around when Cupid calls
Perhaps it lasts forever
Love comes around for one and all
Bringing many together
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks dear friend, Andy Daniels, for your beautiful poem. I love it.
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Ilana Haley • Asim Kumar,
Forgive me for not commenting on your poems until now. I read all your poem devotedly. I saw and red your website. I must admit that I read all your poem with much delight and interest. In my opinion, all your poems are very well written and interesting to read, "let the earth appear in its full bloom." Seems simple sentence, Ha? It isn't, it is a loaded sentence, very beautiful. "It is the mind that swings in vision." Another pearl. I could go on like that forever. You are a wonderful poet. I shall continue to read your poems and comment on each one.
I send you my love.
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Dear poet and friend, Ilana Haley, I have read some of your poems in your web site, these poems are beautiful, and touch my mind. I admire you, dear poet. Thanks for your heartfelt comments on my poems.
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