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MY POEM OF THE DAY
Seniority is reality.Everyone
starts with expectationsFor his or her attemptTo own color conformity,To live
with color’s shade.Yet distance is feltWhen paint has got cracks,And shabby
silhouette-sh...
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brian ernest
Educationalist
and writer self-employed
A series of flashing images...
TIMOTHY
--SERVICE
TECH
Love is kind, love is good. Love is the
only way we can have brotherhood. So don't complain, just love everyone the
same, and you will find life will treat you to a good name.
1. DISCUSSION ON MY POEM IN
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Please read the poem, SENIOR CITIZEN 2, and comment:
ASIM KUMAR PAULIndependent
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It is a life where
seniority comes on the way, Senior citizens are like headlines of the journey,
And before its course begins, one knocks one’s rights, And when age grows,
passage of long way gives Stony thrust, black hair turns like white grass...
6 months ago
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Volodymyr
Editor-in-Chief
at UKRINFORM Photo Department
Very Wise and very touchy
rhymes.
Independent
Writing and Editing Professional
Thanks, Volodymyr Serdiuk,
for reading my poem and comments.
6 months ago
Shah Jehan
teacher at
secondary level at College
nice poem reflecting maturity
and experience...being a senior citizen is being wise...a very positive
image..i like the theme
mickey M. likes this
Carolina
--Spanish
Literature
Very wise. I love the
positive images
Independent
Writing and Editing Professional
Thanks to Shah Jehan Ashrafi
and Carolina Henriquez-Sanguineti, Ph.D. for reading and comments on my poem.
Raven
Raven's
Visionary Art
Ah, this is beautiful and
poinant--I feel it; it alllows one to be in the place of an elder in this sadly
unappreciative youth-worshipping culture. I feel the strength and also how much
our culture needs elders. I would love to walk proudly into my elderhood; full
of smile-lines and my grey hair glinting like a badge of courage and grace--a
touch from Sophia (hopefully worthy of her touch). We can be friends honoring
each other's elderhood--reaching with our hearts and helping with our hands
where no hand is offered.
6 months ago
Bhagirathi
Nothing
It is just a narration.Where
is poessy ?
ths ago
Independent
Writing and Editing Professional
Thanks to Raven Wolf for
reading my poem and a beautiful comment.
6 months ago
Independent
Writing and Editing Professional
Thanks to Bhagirathi
Mahasuar. I have tried to create a feeling and a space of life within my
writing that I call to occupy a poetry; life is poetry.
6 months ago
Raven
Raven's
Visionary Art
I would love to
"hear" another chapter to this poem--the ongoing story. Always when I
read a poem, I become the poet's voice echoing inside. Some poems resonate more
than others of course--but if the maker puts herself or himself into it--I will
feel it.
Poetry is magic in the deepest sense. Sometimes the most simple poem can be very profound--it captures between the lines what is technically impossible to say. It works though because the poem is reconstructed in the heart of the listener. It is OK if one doesn't "get" a poem--it just means the piece didn't "echo" for you personally.
Poetry is magic in the deepest sense. Sometimes the most simple poem can be very profound--it captures between the lines what is technically impossible to say. It works though because the poem is reconstructed in the heart of the listener. It is OK if one doesn't "get" a poem--it just means the piece didn't "echo" for you personally.
2 days ago
Stefan
Superintendent
at DP World - Logistics and Supply Chain
"Still he is searching a
place..." where this crazy-steaming ends?
Sorry, it was just a mind game!
Sorry, it was just a mind game!
2 days ago
Raven
Raven's
Visionary Art
commented on your site...
Independent
Writing and Editing Professional
Thanks Raven Wolf. I read it.
I like it.
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