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Courtney Hosny


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Chicago, Illinois 
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Love is a Thought. An individual thought An indipendent Thought. You can create love for anything, anywere, and at anytime. Love is. Bless you.
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you are always a pleasure to the heart
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I put yellow, green, crimson colors
As the sun is deeper in transition.............Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!my lovely friend Asim
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As with Life itself, Feelings/Emotions are the guide to Truth and Meaning: While not a style I'd be comfortable with, that's immaterial, given my perception that you express your feelings with clarity and a quiet, subtle passion. Keep up the great work, Bro. and ... Namaste.
Blessings always, all ways,
Austin
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Beloved Asim Kumar Paul ji,
Namaskar.
I went through your twelve poems of this website.
I compliment  you for the extraordinary "LOVE SKILLS" well portrayed in your poems. 
I pray God that more such beautiful poems should flow from the tip of your pen to benefit frustrated lovers like me. I will send you shortly a copy of my book "LOVE CHILD" which is print now.
With best wishes,
"Andhra Keats" Rama Rao Saripalli
(via an e-mail dated 19th April, 2012)


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Congratulations!
I am really happy to know of your poems having published in a foreign journal. Thank you verry much."
- commented via e-mail on 18.03.2012 by Poet and
Professor Biplab Chakraborty 
Professor 
Department of Bengali 
Center for Advanced Studies 
University of Burdwan, INDIA 


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"ur luv poems were lovely n they reveal ur lovely heart n soul.They are universal because luv is universal
KEEP IT UP TILL UR GOAL IS REACHED.
DALIP" - commented by poet Dr. Dalip Khetarpal, via e-mail on 18.03.2012

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Yes Asim:
Highly uncompromising vision of Poetry, and the intellectual nuances it vibrates; I'd have to read more extensively, to become seriously involved but it seems to make incredible reading The 'crux,' I agree, stems from physical formatting of works, and the imagery it post-hypnotically conveys on sight. Prose writing is definitely poetry, when defined word by word rather than: part, semi, or wholly competed works. my personal opinion of course.
Henry York

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Literary Production at BA7 LPC
Leeds, United Kingdom 
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Such beauty flowing mastery of glorious unity you share here my dear. Supreme living dream cast amid hearts and minds enchanted divine. Delightful and wonderfully adorned with sweetness true Thank you Asim Kumar, Peace & Plenty, Leela
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Asim, very nice. Your site is soothing. 
Posted by Liz Blackmore commented on 11.03.2012 at literary group 

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"Good portrayal of women of different class and different thoughts." commented by Dr. Shardanand Tiwary on 04.03.2012  on my poem, 

ESSENCE OF WOMAN: FOUR POEMS ON WOMEN’S DAY

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"....what I have seen you have reached an exceedingly high level writing free verses freely....."      commented by Mr.Saripalli Rama Rao on Sat, 25 Feb 2012 via e-mail. 

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When you conceive an idea in your mind, do you feel any type of pain or 

restlessness till the delivery of the expression?



ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Here is how I write my poems, HOW I WRITE MY PROSE POEMS. Writers or Poets may differ:
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DR. SHARDANAND TIWARY • Asim, I visited your site and read how you write; well described, but question is that what stimulates you to be creative?

ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks to respected DR. SHARDANAND TIWARY for reading my poems.

How I can describe it to be creative?

From my school days, I feel something to write down when I feel or see something, thus I wrote poems in school days, in college days, but numbers are a few, and later on in service life, being lastly an Accountant, I publish a literary journal from Kharagpore, (adjacent of IIT Khargpur) with the help of my wife. And the issues are not much in numbers (stopped publication after a few issues), and afterwards I first get self published three poetry books in 2005, 2007, 2010 ( All three books are praised by Dr. Benjamin Zephaniah, and no book is sold) . And after retirement from service, I feel inwardly to write poems, and I am writing them till now. And feeling comes every time whatever I see or feel in my way of walking, and put them in my blog. And after retirement I feel incessantly to go on writing, that I have to control so long due to my professional and familial heavy engagements in my service period.

Perhaps, I cannot describe it properly. I only say some feeling comes in me instinctively when I am moved into seeing or feeling something on my way of life’s walking, and I write down them right away.


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DR. SHARDANAND TIWARY • Asim Kumar-jee, Namaste! I can understand your feelings. I, myself, came to my hometown, Patna from Mumbai after resigning from the post of Chief Editor in 2003. The reason to come back was to care my old parents. Though after coming here, I was nominated as an Adviser by the state goverment in the Media Cell of Department of Tourism. After completing my two terms in 2009, I confined myself within the home to give complete time to my parents. My father (97) left this material world in June 2011 and mother (91) in this January of 2012. So, my web contact is not so old, but now this is the only engagement for me... and my previous experiences and contacts are helpful in this new mission. So, the problems, hurdles and disappointments which you faced are also the stimulating factors of yours. Keep continue... Best wishes!
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • I feel you dear friend, DR. SHARDANAND TIWARY. I have passed all those days in great hardship. I admire you. Thank you for giving me encouragement.


10Ketaki Dutta.Your lines are fantastic. They touch the inmost chord of my heart. Keep writing, Asimda. Love,Ketaki- Commented on "QUOTES OF LOVE" on 5.02.2012 via e-amil  by Dr. Ketaki Dutta, Professor of Bidhannagar Colleg[Govt] Kolkata, INDIA

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Trevor Maynard • Some beautiful phrases "feeble gain" "breathing twist" "careless choice" really enhance the ethereal feel of the poem SHARING OF LOVE capturing the sense of love at a distance, nice work. Commentedon 23.12.2011  by Trevor Maynard,Poet, Writer, Director, Reiki Master

Kingston upon Thames, UNITED KINGDOM, in literary group, POETRY REVIEW AND DISCUSS, IN LINKEDIN.COM

Here is my second blog of my love poems. Please read and comment on the blog poems.

Living with Poetry asimkumarpaul.blogspot.com

He cannot meet her, but he can see her on photos, And send messages and chat by diamond hands, Keyboard and webcam are two origins of contact. Each time she comes on telephone call And just chats and leaves the site with...
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Trevor Maynard • Some beautiful phrases "feeble gain" "breathing twist" "careless choice" really enhance the ethereal feel of the poem SHARING OF LOVE capturing the sense of love at a distance, nice work.
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks to my dear friend, Trevor Maynard, for your valuable comments on my poem.

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 Usha Sharan • Very contemporary-Commented  on 30.01.2012 by Usha Sharan,  
senior lecturer at b.n.mandal university , Madhipura, INDIA at literary group "LITERATURE" in LINKEDIN.COM

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Here are my poems. Please read and comment:

Living with Poetry asimkumarpaul.blogspot.com

He cannot meet her, but he can see her on photos, And send messages and chat by diamond hands, Keyboard and webcam are two origins of contact. Each time she comes on telephone call And just chats and leaves the site with...
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks to my dear friend, Usha Sharan, for reading my poems in my blog.


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"I perceive a deep complexity at the heart of the simplicity of the object(s) of love in these poems. And that is so touching,so unpretentiously meditative."
Commented by Mr. Bukky Olaoye
Lecturer at Baze University Abuja, NIGERIA on 15.01.2012 at POETS UNITED in LinkedIn.com 

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Here is my second blog containing love poems

Living with Poetry asimkumarpaul.blogspot.com

He cannot meet her, but he can see her on photos, And send messages and chat by diamond hands, Keyboard and webcam are two origins of contact. Each time she comes on telephone call And just chats and leaves the site with...
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thank, dear friend Bukky Olaoye for your valuable comments on my poems, and I have posted it in my blog.


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Here is my love poems in a blog. Please read my blog poems and comment

Living with Poetry asimkumarpaul.blogspot.com

He cannot meet her, but he can see her on photos, And send messages and chat by diamond hands, Keyboard and webcam are two origins of contact. Each time she comes on telephone call And just chats and leaves the site with...
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clark cook • Asim, I love your commitment, but by now you /must/ be tired of my saying the same thing again and again. Poetry is a /fusion/ of structure and emotion , of shape and substance. It is not "just" a spontaneous outpouring of impressions. The American poet, Robert Creeley, put it beautifully: FORM IS NOTHING MORE THAN AN EXPRESSION OF CONTENT. Please understand, I am not trying to stifle your feelings or put a strait jacket on how you express yourself--I'm just throwing something out for you to think about. Keep on writing!!
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Dear friend, Clark Cook, here is one example of form of my poem,THE TALK. Please read it and comment
http://asimkumarpaul.blogspot.in/2012/02/talk.html


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Walter Reed Mellott • Nice colledction in love concepts.
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks to my friend, Clarence Mellott, for your valuable comments
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Susan Babyk • In your first poem, "Sharing of Love," I found myself stuck on the phrase "basal of infected matrix" so I had to stop and look it up, but am still confused. I really wanted to move on, but feel a little stuck. Your help is appreciated.
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks dear friend, Susan Babyk, I admire your comments and I have changed it.
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John Winston Gimena • nice poems!
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks to my dear friend, John Winston Gimena for your valuable comments on my poems.
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John Winston Gimena • if i may give some insights about LOVE IN GENESIS

a simple critique:


He lives in another world, ---- away from her
He cannot meet her, but he can see her on photos, ---- lonelines, pictures of her
And send messages and chat by diamond hands, ----
Keyboard and webcam are two origins of contact. ---- VIA INTERNET
Each time she comes on telephone call ---- maybe longing to hear
And just chats and leaves the site with eagerness, his voice
With feet on the ground, on assurances and words, ---- maybe fine, heart beats
He may also appear on her phone call for talks. fast -- VIDEO PHONE?

a HIGH TECH LOVE? LOL!

i'll try to "look" the other stanzas... its worth reading, after the first stanza, the mood changes after the characters introduction about their longingness via worldwidweb (chat, keyboard, webcam,etc...

i like the "... DIAMOND HANDS" as if they are "OLD" or "RIPE" lol!

just my 2 cents...
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Henryk Rogowski • nice poems!
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks to my friend Henryk Rogowski for your valuable comments on my poems.
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Like pattern of organically inflow of blood groups To form a new life, leaving behind parental acceptor and donor sublime, We are moving in the bottom of the love To sink into sea-life, a ...
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RAGHUNATH MISRA • GOOD TOPIC SELECTED BY YOU.MY GOOD WISHES ARE ALWAYS WITH YOU ASIM KUMAR JI.
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks my dear friend, RAGHUNATH MISRA, for reading my poem.
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RAGHUNATH MISRA • I feel it my pleasure to have a chance of viewing you and your poem-ideas-views on various issues.Thanks.
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thanks dear friend RAGHUNATH MISRA, for your view on this poem, i.e. my poem-ideas-views. A good question. Only that I can say, a feeling came in, instinctively, to write down my feeling when I saw my grandson first in nursing home.
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RAGHUNATH MISRA • APPRECIABLE THOUGHT ASIM KUMAR-MY FRIEND. Actually,as you mentioned,poetry come from inside alwayas.My good wishes are always with your right soirit/approach.
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL  My love poem, LOVE IN SOLITUDE

Living with Poetry asimkumarpaul.blogspot.com

I love to live in solitude, as my birth is splendor to my mother, and fighting back is my liking of stronghold moonlight, yet I want to live in solitude, a sequence of intact form, that I love, and I want love in the morning...
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RAGHUNATH MISRA • LIVING WITH POETRY is a charming and aspiring tool.I admire your spirit MR.ASIM KUMAR. I also use to live with literature'all areas,particularly poetry.Felt happy to find you as me.
Carry on.
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RAGHUNATH MISRA • I feel,I can't live without poetry.I have been awarded so many time for extraordinery contributions to hindi literature.Recently I got HINDI GARIMA,KAVYA KESARI,SAHITYABHUSHAN,VIDYAVACHASPATI and so many because of my love with poetry.So poetry is a good friend of mine and with poetry,I never feel lonely.
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ASIM KUMAR PAUL • Thank you dear friend, RAGHUNATH MISRA. I always move with emotions, and poetry is my inspiration, expressed mainly prose form in my instinctive feeling of a situation. I love it.
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Dear Mr. Asim Kumar Paul Ji

I am delighted reading your poems expressing your hearty feelings of love narrating the excellent natural beauty of the hostel and its surroundings at Guntur where we spent two nights and two days forging unbreakable ties of friendship and love. I am unable to forget the event which brought us together.

The poems are excellent and I wish you a bright future.

Wishing you Happy New Year 2012..

Yours cordially,

Saripalli Rama Rao (Via E-mail on 19.12.2011)


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Dear Asim,
It is indeed a pleasure to read your message and your poems. You are not only a man of great heart but also a poet true to the core of your heart. I really enjoyed your company at JKC college and hope to do so in future.You really write nice poems. yours is a treasure. thank you for sending your poems.Tomorrow I am leaving for Allahabad to attend a national seminar on Rabindranathand and on 16 I wll go to Dhaka university to deliver my seminar lecture on poetry. Hope to see you again with your poems.
-Best-Biplab Chakraborty
(07.12.2011 VIA AN E-MAIL)
Professor Biplab Chakraborty,Professor
Department of Bengali
Center for Advanced Studies
University of Burdwan, INDIA==
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