When the little boy is given
New garments, he wears them
And begins running into the room,
And his parents become happy
To take snap of joyfulness
Of their son, they think once
They were little ones and so were
They joyful when they received
New clothes to wear from parents
They then did feel good and moved
Around the house to tell friends
Their parents loved them
Like other who were their friends,
The world moves with these waves
Like sea wave never ends forming wave.
New garments, he wears them
And begins running into the room,
And his parents become happy
To take snap of joyfulness
Of their son, they think once
They were little ones and so were
They joyful when they received
New clothes to wear from parents
They then did feel good and moved
Around the house to tell friends
Their parents loved them
Like other who were their friends,
The world moves with these waves
Like sea wave never ends forming wave.
agree.
ReplyDeletea boy is a lord from heaven for his parents,
delightful experience shared.
love the last two lines.
ReplyDeletewell done.
beautiful sentiments.
ReplyDeletewearing new cloth is fun for young children.
ReplyDeletechildren are angels.
close to reality,
ReplyDeletethanks for writing about kids and how they view family love.
innocent piece with playful imagery.
ReplyDeletei often ask nature to cure me too...
ReplyDelete-robin
http://mysecretinnuendo.com/2014/08/08/show-me-why/
truthful words.
ReplyDeleteSweet and tender. You did well with this piece.
ReplyDeleteinnocent imagery.
ReplyDeletepure and innocent imagery.
ReplyDeletedeep thoughts on innocent souls.
ReplyDeleteexcellent job on a young life.
ReplyDeleteexcellent.
ReplyDeletelovely metaphors and theme.
ReplyDeletelovely take on a child's life.
ReplyDeletea fun piece for little angels, with hopeful mind.
ReplyDeletelovely.
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